Tuesday, March 3, 2009

The Night Does Not Wish To Come

The Night Does Not Wish to Come
So that You can not come
and I can not go
But You will come with your eyes
burned by the Rain.
The Day Does Not Wish to Come
So that You can not come
and I can not go
But You will come thought blinded
by Darkness
Neither Night nor Day wishes to come
So that I may Die for You and for me.......
I wrote this poem so long ago that the scrap of paper I wrote this on has yellowed with age. To be honest I only remember writing the ending of the poem and then misplacing it and forgetting about it only to have it resurface. It has since become one of the works I am proudest of. Even if the only commendation is in my mind, I love this poem

3 comments:

  1. I think it's beautifully written.

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  2. Aww Christian thank you so much! It means alot to me to have someone else appreciate my work. Love you!

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  3. Beautiful!!!! Thank you for visiting my blog and for your lovely comments on my Bottled Fairies & Mermaids. I'll be back for another visit soon. Mandy x

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